Diary Entry and first drafts

Today I have recieved my feed back from my lecturers and started to make some changes to my double page spread and front cover using advice from them and also my class from their feedback on the first half of the lessons evaluation speed dating task in which we looked at each others work and wrote on their sheet one thing we like and one thing we dislike.
Below is my first drafts of my front cover and double page spreads..